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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2003-07-24 01:00 AM



If I could climb every mountain
To be able to look into your eyes
Telling you how much I miss you
This I would surely try
I would split all the oceans
To feel your skin on mine
Lust for your words
That I long to hear in time
I would light all the candles
To make the darkness go away
So you can shine the brightest
During all the words you say
I might even sell my soul
To have you lying next to me
One last night of watching you sleep
Is all I want to see
Maybe one last kiss
Why looking into your eyes
Feeling your hands touch my shoulders
Before you said good-bye?

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-07-24 05:18 AM


They say the more you loved them the more you miss them...that still doesn't solve the problem of why they left...James
eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
2 posted 2003-07-24 02:10 PM


oooo, i like, this one actually brought a tear to my eye, i know how you feel, just one last memory to last forever, love this...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2003-07-25 03:35 AM


nice poem.
its a bit sad and sounds kind of lonely, or at least it fot that way.

-GIS

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