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A few last wishes
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A few last wishes |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas 
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If I could climb every mountain To be able to look into your eyes Telling you how much I miss you This I would surely try I would split all the oceans To feel your skin on mine Lust for your words That I long to hear in time I would light all the candles To make the darkness go away So you can shine the brightest During all the words you say I might even sell my soul To have you lying next to me One last night of watching you sleep Is all I want to see Maybe one last kiss Why looking into your eyes Feeling your hands touch my shoulders Before you said good-bye? A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
They say the more you loved them the more you miss them...that still doesn't solve the problem of why they left...James |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
oooo, i like, this one actually brought a tear to my eye, i know how you feel, just one last memory to last forever, love this...  "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
nice poem. its a bit sad and sounds kind of lonely, or at least it fot that way. -GIS |
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