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Black Jealousy |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Cooling ice in breath of kiss- Trailing sweet from natures lips, Bands of fog in eerie wisp- tantalize my sway of hips… Spinning circles long and wide- I embrace the air taste the night, Moths in flutter- dark justified I bid persuasion then cast aside… Black jealousy roars hard on wind- Vying attention storms contend, Verging hysteria peaceful sway lost- Unwanted rivalry forbidden holocaust… Suggestion withers ~carpe diem~ I drown in the both of foe and friend, Love to the storm and love to the wind… I cradle myself within the contend… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
no no! roar back night-dancer! beautiful BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
Great as always....poetress. Heather |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Even though hard hitting and very powerful, this is still a breath of fresh air compared to some of the things floating around. May we all take a lesson from how you write! And I hope you don't feel like this long! written in blood before everything went black |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Brian- oh but I DO roar back...course wranx will prolly shush me outta here with it...being too vulgar for the kiddies n all!!  ty sweetie...Heather- always a pleasure to know you read hun...thank you! Lori- yep, what a mood...nature can be a holocaust of emotions though...and? I give up to drown in them...grin Glad to see you are still here Lady...was starting to think I needed to miss you before you stayed!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Glad to see you at yr second home, detanya.Some Wonder Lovin' Freak She said burn ... together. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
funny, everytime i bid persuasion, i've lost the auction. maybe i need to study more. this was simply amazing. you have a talent with words that i only wish i had. [This message has been edited by EveGnosis (07-17-2002 03:02 AM).] |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Ahh Haa...I see there is a nother that has been touched by the darkness that few understand... grand read with my morning coffee dear...thank you. Until...ali {alibaster or aka Queen of Darkness...or twisted bi***} "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Mikey- second home...yeppers...but? adult in sore need...sooooo *start spreadin thu neeeewwwssss* (posta sing that y'know!) EveG- talent? eh...I seem to caress the whole crazywhite girl thang...but thanks you!!! Ali- ya don't taste too bad with coffee yourself...what a team...!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (07-17-2002 02:42 PM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
crazy white girl??? ok. . . well, let's try a little beyond that, and then. . . you're close. . . it would seem that the Darkness calls back many my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
great poem! even though i've never read any others of yours i defidently loved it. ooo too vulgar with the kiddies huh? you haven't seen the worst...hahaha. anyways i'm just feeling a little strange right now so it's time for me to go...goodbye! my short hearted friend...hahaha. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Just revisitng a few old friends |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
devina . . . I wish I wrote this is beauty in darkness xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
very nice write... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Um...wranx??? my dear, I miss you all too. Check yr mail man...I so loved hearing from you!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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