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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2003-07-21 11:06 PM


Where all gather
to come
the shoreline
the souls, from the vast
they came
as if
it will last
the happy and gay
the sad know it too
those with the toot
and the lowly and blue
the waves sometimes knows -
when and which, will come
but the winds shuttle in
the next for the sum
welcome the many
for their choice know the shore
their here
their life, their town so allured
the souls, the vast
the known, the outcasts
carry
the mystic
as they did, in the past.


If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (07-21-2003 11:12 PM).]

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wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2003-07-21 11:15 PM


Ahhh, This is good.

Really nicely penned.


~wranx

"You shouldn't be surprised at what happens next"


mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-07-21 11:25 PM


Thanks wranx.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
3 posted 2003-07-22 08:24 PM


damn poe, this was great...beautiful...i really don't need to say more except

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

4 posted 2003-07-22 11:03 PM


Thanks eor, I just read what you have wrote recently. Real nice write. Keep it going.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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