Dark Poetry #3 |
Howl Down The Moon |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Howl Down The Moon Scream it out howl down the moon Scream it loud across the frozen land They’ll never see you among the wretched crowd Another faceless fool, just one more damaged soul Chasing broken dreams through the endless void Expand in thought as you blend within For it’s the life we live born from their sin |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
that was icy, and I can clearly tell what you're talking about. Good job. *Wind* I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
ooh love it. Nice and cold. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Perhaps cold is the way of the heart? Appreciate your thoughts, take care! And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..thats some raw stuff there... enjoyed hugs, g |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSweetEddie~ I LOVE the title ... and the *gifting* of your thoughts is inspiration to my own~ *Huglets* sweetie~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
another faceless fool indeed, good write... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
g ~ Well I think raw is definitely the term that describes me my friend, thank you! Marge ~ Thinking about it now I guess I should have known you’d like the title. Thank you, as always, you’ve left me with a smile. Take care! eor ~ sometimes I’m all to recognizable, but certainly the fool! Thanks. i'm not saying anybody's wrong or right, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
haven't read your darker poems till now...and this one has an essence of sorriful states of life in it...interesting way of expressing it. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-22-2003 12:56 AM).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
As with may, I feel the dark is my real home! Thanks for adding your thoughts. i'm not saying anybody's wrong or right, |
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perseph1ne Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 16IL |
This is great. I love the image of howling down the moon. Who doesn't have moments in their life when you want to just want to scream? It's a shame it isn't really socially acceptable to just go out somewhere and scream; in frustration, anger, at the unfairness of life. I think everyone would feel so much better if we had a chance to scream/yell/howl. Perseph1ne "Words are, of course, the most powerful drug used by mankind." |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
oowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww heresssss johnny!!!!! haha, very original. |
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