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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2003-07-01 09:25 AM



Howl Down The Moon


Scream it out
howl down the moon
Scream it loud
across the frozen land
They’ll never see you
among the wretched crowd
Another faceless fool,
just one more damaged soul
Chasing broken dreams
through the endless void
Expand in thought
as you blend within
For it’s the life we live
born from their sin

© Copyright 2003 E.T. Meehan - All Rights Reserved
Wind
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1 posted 2003-07-01 10:26 AM


that was icy, and I can clearly tell what you're talking about. Good job.
*Wind*

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay
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IcyFlamez89
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2 posted 2003-07-01 11:09 AM


ooh love it. Nice and cold.
EagleOne
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3 posted 2003-07-03 05:33 AM


Perhaps cold is the way of the heart? Appreciate your thoughts, take care!

And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin

dgvarner
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4 posted 2003-07-20 10:06 AM


wow..thats some raw stuff there...

enjoyed

hugs, g

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5 posted 2003-07-20 10:40 AM


OhSweetEddie~
I LOVE the title ... and the *gifting* of your thoughts is inspiration to my own~
*Huglets* sweetie~
~*Marge*~

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eor
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6 posted 2003-07-21 12:06 PM


another faceless fool indeed, good write...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

EagleOne
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7 posted 2003-07-21 06:38 AM


g ~ Well I think raw is definitely the term that describes me my friend, thank you!

Marge ~ Thinking about it now I guess I should have known you’d like the title. Thank you, as always, you’ve left me with a smile. Take care!

eor ~ sometimes I’m all to recognizable, but certainly the fool! Thanks.

i'm not saying anybody's wrong or right,
just know i'd die to be with you tonight ~ sandford

ecrivan
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8 posted 2003-07-22 12:56 PM


haven't read your darker poems till now...and this one has an essence of sorriful states of life in it...interesting way of expressing it.

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EagleOne
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9 posted 2003-07-22 07:10 AM


As with may, I feel the dark is my real home! Thanks for adding your thoughts.

i'm not saying anybody's wrong or right,
just know i'd die to be with you tonight ~ sandford

perseph1ne
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10 posted 2003-07-22 09:55 PM


This is great. I love the image of howling down the moon. Who doesn't have moments in their life when you want to just want to scream? It's a shame it isn't really socially acceptable to just go out somewhere and scream; in frustration, anger, at the unfairness of life. I think everyone would feel so much better if we had a chance to scream/yell/howl.
Perseph1ne

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    -- Rudyard Kipling

dertah
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11 posted 2003-07-22 11:46 PM


oowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww  heresssss johnny!!!!!  haha, very original.
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