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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
A sudden smile, coming out of Nowhere, interrupting lunch or dinner. An unusual pause, just staring at The table, but not really, More like seeing through it. Occasionally, a brother or sister or friend Notices it, and perfectly understands, Too. He or she knows What it's like. And sometimes, He or she will have His or her sudden smile, Unusual pause in a minute. Daddy Just shrugs. Mommy raises an eyebrow. The episode is over. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
hmmm..I think I like it. A very unique piece about a seemly small incident. But you made it have meaning and deepth. Great job. ~Lex...  |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
interesting write... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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