Dark Poetry #3 |
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Peyote-man won the game |
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Magia_negra Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 77CA, USA |
Desert. You. Me. Tarantula touching my toes. I'd like to run away with coyotes To escape from your voice. I stand there naked, burned Watch you playing with the knife. As soon as they smell the blood For me they'll come, for my life. Why do you want my death? What have I done wrong? Haven't I been true? Haven't I been strong? Desert is filling me with dust. It is eating my lungs, my brains There are no borders, no roads Just the horizon, space. I stand there naked, with empty heart With broken wings and stolen pride I'd like to run away with coyotes Far away in the healing night. Friend, you're a monster I am tired of this pain I am ready to die now Whispering your name. Desert. You. Me. Tarantula touching my toes. Kill me fast. Make me free From you beautiful voice. ...somos los locos para siempre |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
this is so good, very unique. I little vague, but I guess its good that way. ~Lex |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
as I suspected... it serves you very well the power is strong in you |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
good write i really like the descriptiveness of it... "in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A good read...Solid write ~wranx "You shouldn't be surprised at what happens next" |
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missmisery61 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 56 |
I sense in this that someone is holding captive your emotions, bleeding you if you will. I feel as if you are begging for them to "end it", thereby allowing your release. Very good write. So lord I see you grinnin' must be grand always winning....AIC |
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Magia_negra Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 77CA, USA |
Thank you all ![]() Missmisery, you got me ![]() ...somos los locos para siempre |
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