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Ever unfinished |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
And on the day that it comes for me I’ll be waiting with open arms And on the day that it sets me free I’ll be waiting with open sores And on the day that this lets me be I’ll be as warm as I can be Midnight rings the clock See apocalypse in my eyes And on the day that it wraps me in I’ll embrace its black shawls And on the day it pours me from its skin You’ll be drinking from my pores And on that day the bones will thin You’ll have seen me lose Midnight rings the clock See apocalypse in my eyes Here it comes Here, here it comes Here, here, here it comes Here, here, here, here it comes Here, here, here it comes Here, here it comes Here it comes Hear it come |
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Magia_negra Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 77CA, USA |
I like it. Nothing exists forever... And after apocalypse of the inside or outside world there is always a new beginning. ...somos los locos para siempre |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
amazing! I simply loved this. great! the ending was so good. you have true talent. ~Lex |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Thank you both very much for your responses. I am going through a phase in my writing where I am getting better at applying my own life issues into my writing. My writing has become more and more personal. Thanks again. |
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