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Dark Poetry #3

Failure

somethinginyoursocks
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 28
IN, the U.S. of A.

0 posted 2003-07-18 05:45 PM

Failure is a prison
  yet, I hold the key.
I must crouch and gravel in this cell
  for the ceiling is low
  and there is a pit below
that I have fallen in before...
  a bottomless depression.

I can feel the weight of pride.  The ceiling
  is getting heavier
  is getting hotter
  is getting lower.
If I stand, I am crushed
If am humble, I have lost
  and will never escape this cage.

The key is myself and I rely on it only
  For it is I who walk in
              I who walk out
        and I who built this sepulchre...

-I don't need a signature-

IcyFlamez89
Member

since 2003-02-14

Posts 292
Jersey City NJ

1 posted 2003-07-18 05:50 PM

Wow. Your a master of words, reeling me into every letter. Do you think you have enough space in that cell for one more person.... say me?

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