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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2003-07-12 11:18 AM


Our day is known as brought with our soul, the package of might with a future so bright. To touch and feel this we call real, our questions and answers seem always concealed.
to awake
we must
to go
and to trust
the meanings that lie
on the corners at dusk
so cradle the soul and let it be bold
through time and journey
and the moments they hold
The package can see what lies in the breeze, caught between sights these moments so bright. So be not so cold for the package will know, the life and the soul, the story is told.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (07-12-2003 11:45 AM).]

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spritrider87
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since 2003-05-31
Posts 294
NH
1 posted 2003-07-12 05:50 PM


i like this alot it is very well written and it has alot of feeling in it keep it up your good.

"i am in troble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages then help me.
at the end of the rope taking my last breath "

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-07-12 10:05 PM


Thanks Spirit.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

missmisery61
Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 56

3 posted 2003-07-18 11:11 AM


This flows so nicely and is so beautiful!  I loved this piece, very well done.

So lord I see you grinnin' must be grand always winning....AIC

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

4 posted 2003-07-18 08:52 PM


Thanks missmisery61 and thanks for commenting. Glad you enjoyed it.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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