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Dark Poetry #3

The Day of Death and Love

Agi
New Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 6

0 posted 2003-07-14 05:50 AM

And a part of him died
and a part of her cried
No future to hope for
no past to think of
Just some looks and smiles
Words that were said
and are forgotten now
You’ll just get hurt
Like always
So smile, while a part of you cries
and a part of him dies
Somewhere in the distance, one day
you’ll hear a voice
that’ll remind you of him
You will stop and think of him
And the moment of peace will come
Taking you softly to the time
When a part of you died
and a part of him cried.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-07-15 10:35 AM

Happens all the time...James

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2003-07-15 12:33 PM

this is truely one of the greatest poems i ever read. thanks for shareing and keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Agi
New Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 6

3 posted 2003-07-16 02:17 AM

Thanks all,

I wrote this poem when I was saying goodbye to someone that meant a lot to me. He didn't die, but I felt like he was gone forever and that a part of me died with him.....

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

4 posted 2003-07-17 05:59 PM

how sad and so beautifully written,a really touching one...
So smile, while a part of you cries
this line is so great

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

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