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Dark Poetry #3

Waiting

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

0 posted 2003-03-19 11:54 PM

Waiting

I can smell your cologne
A reminder of memories
Trapped under the sorrows that
Follow me through my days
Trailing behind with soft whispers
Wanting to overtake my thoughts
Constant fighting in the darkness
Of my lace webbed mind
Echoing screams slither their
Hypnotic dance as I wait for
The elusive silence.

"wake me up inside
call my name and save me from the dark"
-Bring Me To Life by Evanescence

Flower
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

1 posted 2003-03-20 05:24 PM

Interesting post. I liked it.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Finally_When
Junior Member

since 2003-03-20

Posts 13
Land Of Misfits...

2 posted 2003-03-20 06:41 PM

Intresting use of words..I enjoyed it!

Simply When..

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-07-13 10:56 PM

Enjoyed...James

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

4 posted 2003-07-14 06:05 AM

Memories and sorrows and ... yes, this belongs in the dark. Well done!

And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

5 posted 2003-07-17 06:01 PM

very interesting...great

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

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