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T-Bird
Junior Member
since 2003-07-02
Posts 17
Washington, United States

0 posted 2003-07-10 02:06 PM


Please give give good advice if u think it would help make this better.

I feel completely
hopeless,
helpless,
and useless...

I thought I was strong
but yet again
I've proven myself
wrong

I feel totally
lost,
alone,
and scared...

I thought I'd found direction
but took a turn
must have been completely
wrong

I feel utterly
sad,
sick,
and afraid...

Life's [edited by moderator] with me
once again
close my eyes
and don't see the end.

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (07-11-2003 05:56 AM).]

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Dark Kisses
Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
1 posted 2003-07-10 05:07 PM


Sad to say but I can really relate to this poem!

Good write

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