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LilElmo
New Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 5
illinois

0 posted 2003-07-09 01:35 PM

One Last Kiss

You said you loved me
That our love would never end
But then you chose her
And said we could be friends
You said you cared for me
And loved me with all your heart
But now you're with her
And my heart is torn apart
I tired to move on with my life
I don't want you anymore
I tried to let go of the memories
And throw them right out of the door
I want to get rid of you
I want to be free
But there's feelings about you
These feelings deep down inside me
You made me believe you
You said I was your all
But now it's her instead of me
Going with you to the mall
Going to the park
Going to the movies with you
And cuddling in the dark
I will get over you
I will be free
I will get rid of these feelings
That live inside of me
You hurt me once
You hurt me twice
I will not let you
Hurt me thrice
Never again
Will i feel like this
'Cause now i give you
One last kiss
By: Tomeka

infinite disaster
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 69
Illinois

1 posted 2003-07-09 02:23 PM

awwww!!! tomeka, that was so good! u write some pretty good poems! keep writing!
much love, akie.

The hardest thing a guy can do is make a girl fall for him with no intention of catching her.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2003-07-09 03:45 PM

welcome to passions...good write, lots of emotion...enjoyed

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

3 posted 2003-07-09 05:12 PM

"One Last Kiss" .... excellent end to an emotional setting.

Welcome to Passions. I hope you feel at home here!

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-07-09 07:06 PM

Nice writing...James

Enotneicna
Member

since 1999-06-06

Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

5 posted 2003-07-10 01:00 AM

Tomeka.....welcome to Passions!!!!!!!

To let go of love with one last kiss.....well done!

many blessings
always
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

6 posted 2003-07-10 01:19 PM

very nice write. i enjoyed this one, and know where its coming from.

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