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Dark Poetry #3

Ode to Becky

somethinginyoursocks
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 28
IN, the U.S. of A.

0 posted 2003-07-03 12:01 PM

The intrepid journey of a melody
      so sweet, so beautiful, so melancholy
I fear has brought mine internal thought.

Trumpets blazing
          Trombones blaring
                    Drums a banging
                             and Saxophones breathing
All evoke my own dischordant harmony.
The eerie Piano;
      the dewed grass on which I stand.
The softly moving Violins;
      your hair in the wind. I see you stand
             on French Horns and Baritones helping
             to introduce you proper, beautiful, and grand.

The distance between us (tempo diminuendo)
Shows my your Fluted eyes
                   with a Piccolo shimmering.
Clarinets spilling my minor key
are received by your Flutes and completed in harmony;
Debussy could not have written so prettily
as Wagner couldn't be more majestically
       creative as you are.

[This message has been edited by somethinginyoursocks (07-03-2003 09:30 PM).]

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