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Dark Poetry #3

After Spoken

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-01 10:05 PM

Rose again,
bloom darkness and pain.
Withered, seeping color
of blood.
I've been meaning to speak,
but choked, I couldn't find the words.
Cut me deeper with your prose,
where do those words go
after spoken..?

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-07-01 10:38 PM

Nice poem. Your imagery is beautiful.

Ladybug
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 236
Massachusetts

2 posted 2003-07-02 09:56 AM

Hi Kaoru, very cool poem! Love the last line.

Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-07-02 07:05 PM

"Cut me deeper wiht your prose"

words that could be etched in time, thats where they go...beautiful as always...

Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

4 posted 2003-07-05 12:59 PM

this really echoes.

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

5 posted 2003-07-05 03:56 AM

very nice. Ending with a question is brilliant, keeps us thinking.

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