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somethinginyoursocks
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0 posted 2003-06-30 05:04 PM


I saw the stars escaping from the midnight sky
  and dreams dripped through a pale, scarlet moon.
A fire inside climaxed with a supernova
  of hopes in bloom, of pain debuted.
Stars allied, then stars collide
  when the melancholy aspect of a smile appears.
(Dichotomus blend when seasons end
  but stars fall with stories that idolize them all.)
The vicious entrapment of a miniscule pulsar
  sharing the wake with the culprit,
But the star rises above this standard and norm
  and the predator cannot have it.

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1 posted 2003-07-01 10:14 PM


"A fire inside climaxed with a supernova
  of hopes in bloom, of pain debuted.
Stars allied, then stars collide
  when the melancholy aspect of a smile appears.
(Dichotomus blend when seasons end
  but stars fall with stories that idolize them all.)"

Great lines, read this more than a few times! Loved it.

Chameleon
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2 posted 2003-07-05 12:53 PM


a unique gem.
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