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Dark Poetry #3

of something like a child

Gavin
Junior Member

since 2003-06-22

Posts 47

0 posted 2003-06-30 11:22 AM

decisions tend to comprehend incensions
and visions bend and lend precision

to your dreams that teem with lore
of ancient myths and systs that sore

a kind of aching that's breaking time
that's not for making so faking's fine

just keep hope and and hope will dine
just run from sun to mysery's mind

losing's lost in pressure's tide
kindness sinks below the pride

so lift your chin and hold it high
as the wrecking ball closes in from atop the sky

if its up to you then it's you to up
and heal the people of their cuts

dawning dawn's apocalyptic view
just accept, reject and forget to build anew

just toss away oblivion like candy from the children
maybe the masses will follow and soon after you'll be rid of them

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-01 10:12 PM

"a kind of aching that's breaking time
that's not for making so faking's fine

just keep hope and and hope will dine
just run from sun to mysery's mind

losing's lost in pressure's tide
kindness sinks below the pride

so lift your chin and hold it high
as the wrecking ball closes in from atop the sky"

Great write, flowed very well..
Enjoyed

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2003-07-06 12:08 PM

You've written lyrics here, or one could read it that way.

A pretty good effort.

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