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Nick_UK
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since 2000-07-21
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0 posted 2003-06-29 06:18 PM



Here's some lyrics I wrote today.  Any comments would be most appreciated.

Verse:    
Sanguine tears for dying sun
Besmear a mother’s face
Evidence, self-evident
Eminent disgrace

Verse:
Thorns crown defiant brow
Nails in faithless hands
Sacrifice the soul of man
Blood soaked holy land

Verse:
Cursed cross of a suicide
Unto possession led
Forgotten words of Jesus
Paint the wall blood red

Verse:
Vow of preservation
Inviting sure decay
Holy façade crumbling
Consecrate in flame

Refrain:
One by one wounds of Christ
Manifest in me
Five degrees of purity
Suffuse, incarnadine

Chorus:
Suffer this benediction
Five wounds of Christ
Living crucifixion
Bloody divine rites

Bridge:
Faith defies reason
Cardinal treason
Divine right to divide
Crucify this messenger
Exorcise a lie


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