Dark Poetry #3 |
Smudges |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Eliminating all grasp of rational rememberance suck me under prize me from safe no more waiting for light to hit your vision still I pine for coal black smudges of how it once was to be so alone whilst with you. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Love this |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Very good. I admire the simplicity of it. Whenever I write it's never very simple and easily understood at times. But I'm a nutcase and that's a good poem. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Gemma, you are certanly dark, but I prefer you in open, were more people will appreciate you. This poem was beutifully written, and bitter as heck. But I would miss you if you stayed over here in the dark too long I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
beautiful...in the only way dark poetry can... |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
moody and mystical. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
This poem really does something for me. I just really like how it is short yet very moving at the same time. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
nice gem . . . trying to convince yourself of change while wanting the old xxoo |
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