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Dark Poetry #3

the cycle

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2003-06-13 10:43 AM

from one and all came to be
parts of whom
as told
from that seed
govern by time, the orb continues
like ceilings and walls
our life and menu
from long ago
or is it now, the moment called
the cycle.
for time, to awake
another yearn
tomorrow waits
for it's turn
and the question follows
this life we call
another day
this game we play.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (06-13-2003 09:00 PM).]

laurie
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 153
canada, ontario

1 posted 2003-06-14 08:58 PM

interesting, mystic.. l like, though it's gonna take another couple reads to sink in... it's..insightful, l think. l think thats the word l want. anyway, interesting rhythm.
laurie.

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

2 posted 2003-06-15 10:50 AM

Thanks for stopping by laurie, enjoy your comments.

mysticpoe

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-06-15 03:02 PM

nice write, it took me a couple times through to see excatly what you were saying, but i like...eor

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

4 posted 2003-06-15 05:50 PM

Thanks eor, glad you liked it.

mysticpoe

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