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A GOD'S point of view
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A GOD'S point of view |
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Chris- Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 52 |
an empty god runnning through a field looking for sod to help his wounds heal so he burns a village and finds his ointment he's plundered and pillaged with such dissapointment and so he wonders to himself where are my followers, where are my sheep, why won't my sUn come out and play, why do my people not wake from sleep the skies begin to black as the rain begins to pour the god in tears lies on his back cursing the heavens ready for war whoever has done this no matter who you are you will pay with your soul he screamed from afar and as he gazed down at his broken kingdom he thought, the killer was me, he cried distraught and so with one burning fist, the one he used to turn his kingdom to myth he silenced himself, setting exsistence adrift *I posted this in the main forums and i didn't think it would do to well there but here i think it is a little more apropriate i guess, so enjoy unless you already enjoyed then i hope you liked it* [This message has been edited by Chris- (06-09-2003 01:37 PM).] |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
l do like. an interesting take on god, and religion... thanx for the good read. laurie. btw, are you allowed to post 1 poem in 2 forums? |
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Chris- Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 52 |
i dont no i'm new to these forums and i didn't read the legal stuff, no ones really looking at it anywhere anyways so i guess it doesn't really matter too much |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
ah... well, u might want to look into that, cause l got a silly feeling it is... anyway, l did like hte poems, (read em both) so yeah... laurie. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
You wrote a very interesting story here. You should continue the meaning w/another poem Part II. mysticpoe |
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