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Midnight Sun |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
Silent cries of pain, wordless pleas for help, unheard whispers of agony, mindless dreams of rage, sweeet surrender of mind and body, to unseen terror, the devil's work. Slow death of the soul sudden loss of beauty, evil creeping in darkness hidden from prying eyes of light, persuing, giving the ilvin the harsh pain of death; silent cries of pain as a midnight sun comes out to play, evil nights of evil fun. Wordless pleas for help, gasped in darkness by the helpless. Mindless dreams of rage, fire and death taking life. Sweeet surrendor to unseen terror without my lover's embrace, beauty ingrained in my mind. Slow death of the soul - loss of love - sudden loss of beauty through the death of a relationship. Pan when a midnight sun comes out to play, evil nights of fun without remorse, a heart turned evil by rage... l don't know why l wrote this, there is no lover, nor am l in love... it's a different style, l have no idea what... but hey... maybe someone will find it interesting, or whatever...hehee if life isn't what you want, view it throguh insanity's sheild, and you'll always have what you want... |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Within the many wave lenghts of spirituality. Do our own feelings tap the crossing of such. Or do they us. Don't want to sound weird, but this is the feeling that I got after reading your poem. Enjoyed. mysticpoe |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
yeah.. thats ok... poems take more than one meaning for everyone. and no, ur not sounding weird. glad i gave u something... laurie. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is really cool, I like muchly  The style definitely likes you heheKeep um coming...... Luv, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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