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Dark Poetry #3

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SCREAMIN
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 51
US, Tx

0 posted 2003-06-04 05:50 PM

I was so close
So very close to doing the one thing that would have destroyed my soul
I almost lost everything I’ve built my stability upon
All the things I said I would never do again…
I’m so weak that I fear I won’t survive the pressure
It’ll kill me,
But I wonder if that’s the easiest way out
The wanting, the desire, and the craving is powerfully overwhelming
It eats away at my soul
Testing me, seeing how long I can last without breaking
My mind has closed
And I feel my body become numb to the longing
The pain has gone away
It is in that moment that I realize
I’ve already broken; I let the yearning take over
And I am still aching, still wanting, still needing

Hello rock bottom
Shame to see you again

And so the taunting commences

But soft, what light through yonder window break. It is the east, and Juliet is the sun...

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-06-04 06:25 PM

intersting

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2003-06-05 12:36 PM

Interesting... but I like it.

Hope things aren't really that bad for you

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

3 posted 2003-06-09 12:17 PM

powerful write

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

Chris-
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 52

4 posted 2003-06-09 12:35 PM

rock bottom is life and pain is life cherish and embrace every aspect of existence but don't make the same mistake my cousin did, do not let go of that embrace its never worth it and beleive me i was at a point in my life many times before where death seemed to be the easiest way out but it never is and i'm not getting all religous or anything just look up you can you have a neck you have eyes the world is what you make it not what people say you're making out of it

gyiel marlok
Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 145
OHIO

5 posted 2003-06-09 08:20 PM

i've sorta seen this place before,my dad helluva lot more than me,write on

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