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the poison |
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Chameleon Member
since 2002-08-07
Posts 99Australia |
As much as i fantasise about my death, I am drawn back to the garden of misery, the poison ivy. Tangled in the vines, in the web, the trees are now my friends. fold, as the spider closes in. The thorns of the vines tighten and dig in, into my skin. Cold as a kiss from the wind. Another drag on this cigarette, the smoke swirling like a marionette. Cold as a kiss from the wind, fold as the spider closes in. The trees are now my friends and anima peace pretends. numb, as the poison on my skin. the poison. |
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a_hollowman Junior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 30Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
nice poem, but the first stanza seems to start on a different theme, although overall its a fascinating piece of work. good job |
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Paxia New Member
since 2003-06-06
Posts 4Minnesota, U.S. |
Cool poem. Nice use of symbolism. Love it. |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
[This message has been edited by laurie (06-08-2003 09:40 PM).] |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
l luv the imagery... it's amazing, l swear. laurie. actually, your whole poem is amazing... laurie. |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
the poison, i would like to say it is very cool |
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