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Dark Poetry #3
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Chris-
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since 2003-06-09
Posts 52
0 posted 2003-06-09 12:27 PM

runnning from the endlessness
so hollow and discontent
i run to get back to my empty void
in which my life i've spent
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laurie
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since 2003-05-28
Posts 153
canada, ontario
1 posted 2003-06-09 01:42 AM

an interesting play on words...
flows really well, chris.
l hope you keep writing, and posting.
think you'll do well here - welcome to pips!
lol.
gyiel marlok
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 145
OHIO
2 posted 2003-06-09 08:17 PM

i think you cut it to short,you just want us begging for more
Chris-
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since 2003-06-09
Posts 52
3 posted 2003-06-09 11:42 PM

its part of the poem, its short and unfinished like this persons life, he'll never get what he wants and he'll just barely have enough of what he needs, thanks to both of you for posting though love the feedback
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