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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-05-31 04:30 PM


Lonely Tonight

Laying in bed
all lonely
at night.
Realizing
I'm lonely
again tonight.

Nothing a soul
can do.
Lonely doesn't
cater to you.
Lonely never leaves
until its through.

Lonely, lonely, lonely.
Sticking to you.
Like crazy
glue.

JamesLee
May30
2003

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Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2003-05-31 07:43 PM


Lonely is a tough place to be my friend. I have visited there far to often myself. I hope your stay is a short one and my thoughts are with you.

Marilyn.

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247
nc
2 posted 2003-05-31 11:03 PM


JamesMicheal:
   I know all to well how it feels to be lonley...even when your life is full you can still feel the pangs of lonliness on the edges... I hope your darkness leaves you sooner the later. Take care

     Lisa

MellonCollie
Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe
3 posted 2003-06-03 02:00 PM


i can relate to your words and felings...a real powerful piece of writing

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

a_hollowman
Junior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 30
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada
4 posted 2003-06-04 02:12 PM


Lonely... such a misunderstood sentiment. Alas! for we are all alone, one could muse, individuals in an existential life. But as for the poem, I liked it. Very central to the theme and pleasant.
NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
5 posted 2003-06-04 02:40 PM


The hardest place to be at night is in that lonely corner. If this is written about you, I'm sorry you have to be there and hope you can emerge soon.

Sending a Smile ...
Hugs, Marti

Dark Kisses
Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
6 posted 2003-06-09 12:12 PM


Yep, that crazy glue is a tough lil ****  eh?
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
7 posted 2003-06-11 09:26 PM


I know this feeling all too well these days.
Enjoyed...

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
8 posted 2003-06-11 10:21 PM


sometimes I enjoy being lonely.. (tee hee hee) It depends on how you look at it I guess. all i know is Super glue can sure be a pain in the ass
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