Dark Poetry #3 |
Distance |
Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Your love is from a distant Yet not so far away The few miles that are between us Leaves me... tired and fray *Anyone want to help me finish this?* |
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Chris- Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 52 |
so to the night I'll sing and hope that satelite will bring the love from you to me a feeling as endless as Saturn's rings * sorry its not very sad and i used the space theme because I'm listening to satelite of love by Lou Reed but I'm listening to the cover by Milla Jovovich, anyways hope you feel better* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Your love is from a distant Yet not so far away The few miles that are between us Leaves me... tired and fray so to the night I'll sing and hope that satelite will bring the love from you to me a feeling as endless as Saturn's rings Though there is distance betwen us space keeping us apart We love each other deeply and are together in heart But we are still unhappy each feeling such heartache That if we are not together soon our hearts will surely break [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-09-2003 03:53 AM).] |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Your love is from a distant Yet not so far away The few miles that are between us Leaves me... tired and fray so to the night I'll sing and hope that satelite will bring the love from you to me a feeling as endless as Saturn's rings Though there is distance betwen us space keeping us apart We love each other deeply and are together in heart But we are still unhappy each feeling such heartache That if we are not together soon our hearts will surely break Come home to me? |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Thank you all for this. A great poem we have created. A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Way beyond anything I could throw forward, great work all round! And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I don't have anything to add except a few tears of my own and a hug. enjoyed You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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