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Dark Kisses
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0 posted 2003-06-09 12:08 PM



Your love is from a distant
Yet not so far away
The few miles that are between us
Leaves me... tired and fray


*Anyone want to help me finish this?*

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Chris-
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1 posted 2003-06-09 01:20 AM


so to the night I'll sing
and hope that satelite will bring
the love from you to me
a feeling as endless as Saturn's rings

* sorry its not very sad and i used the space theme because I'm listening to satelite of love by Lou Reed but I'm listening to the cover by Milla Jovovich, anyways hope you feel better*

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2 posted 2003-06-09 03:42 AM


Your love is from a distant
Yet not so far away
The few miles that are between us
Leaves me... tired and fray

so to the night I'll sing
and hope that satelite will bring
the love from you to me
a feeling as endless as Saturn's rings


Though there is distance betwen us
space keeping us apart
We love each other deeply
and are together in heart

But we are still unhappy
each feeling such heartache
That if we are not together soon
our hearts will surely break






[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-09-2003 03:53 AM).]

Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods
3 posted 2003-06-10 07:16 PM


Your love is from a distant
Yet not so far away
The few miles that are between us
Leaves me... tired and fray

so to the night I'll sing
and hope that satelite will bring
the love from you to me
a feeling as endless as Saturn's rings

Though there is distance betwen us
space keeping us apart
We love each other deeply
and are together in heart

But we are still unhappy
each feeling such heartache
That if we are not together soon
our hearts will surely break

Come home to me?

Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
4 posted 2003-06-10 10:28 PM


Thank you all for this.
A great poem we have created.


A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

EagleOne
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5 posted 2003-06-11 02:10 AM


Way beyond anything I could throw forward, great work all round!

And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin

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6 posted 2003-06-11 09:34 PM


I don't have anything to add except a few tears of my own and a hug. enjoyed

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

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