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Dark Poetry #3

Lyric damnation

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-05-29 02:42 PM

Foaming at the mouth
internal exorcism
of deep demonic scars
left long ago
under cover of night
pale moonlit
graves
shine like diamonds
on this eve
wake from your slumber
you hounds of hell
you creatures from the abyss
who have seduced
with wine debauchery
laced with harlot
poisoned favor
Awken oh my hellish heart
so thou must dine
on the soul
left for vulture's feast
on but this
this evil eve
I remember rote childhood prayers
vaguely
trying to call down angels
as I fall into the abyss
impaling myself
on the razor point
of my own delusion
as Gabriel laughs in the distance

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

1 posted 2003-05-30 12:38 PM

Brad, very line is magnetizing. Great job!!

mysticpoe

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-05-31 07:51 PM

I loved this. The references and the imagery are excellent.

Marilyn.

[This message has been edited by Marilyn (06-01-2003 08:01 AM).]

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-06-02 02:03 PM

thank you

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

4 posted 2003-06-03 02:02 PM

wow...the pictures you create with your words are clearly visible befor my inner eye...

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-06-03 04:03 PM

thank you!

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