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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
0 posted 2003-05-25 10:43 PM

I feel as though
I am missing a joy
Which I always dreamed of  
I wished for this
Though it leaves me behind
  
I love you
And you love me
But if this love
Is not shown
You shall make me crumble
At your hands

[This message has been edited by Neala (05-26-2003 09:45 AM).]
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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
1 posted 2003-05-26 01:34 AM

this doesn't sound like it's finished
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2003-05-26 02:20 AM

Make you ....what?

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.
Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-05-26 09:45 AM

Sorry it wasn't it was late and I wasn't paying enough attention. Sorry about that.
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