MIIM(Man to machine) Part 2

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Dark Poetry #3

MIIM(Man to machine) Part 2

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2003-05-20 01:52 AM

My thoughts, no longer scattered,
Logic pervades where once was chaos,

With each situation kept in mind,
To the other kind I succumb,

I reboot my mind and of I go,
To a land full of tastelessness,

When I feed on a grape,
I feel no pleasure,

Nor do I feel fear,
When my heart is sheared,

This man inside me has drown,
In the vast pool of logic that is around,

No longer, I live for desires,
Or for goals and dreams,

I function today,
Without tomorrow’s concern,

I have become the machine,
Fleeing the busted humanity.

SgtMac
Junior Member

since 2003-05-19

Posts 13

1 posted 2003-05-20 05:08 PM

Thanks for the input.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-05-21 10:36 PM

hey, I've often felt like this myself. Good write, thanks for the read.
Jenni

Every oak tree started out as a couple of nuts who stood their
ground. --Anonymous

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2003-05-21 11:13 PM

You have captured a place I am familiar with. Well done.

Marilyn.

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