Dark Poetry #3 |
This, my friend, is me |
ObeyYourGoldfish Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 12 |
I am a fictacious character, a bum surrounded by rich kids, a dark flower in a bed of daisies, a freak surrounded by clowns, a tear on the face of a loved one. I'm everything you dont want to be This, my friend, is me I am lost, in plain sight a timid rabbit, ready to take flight I am the person dressed in black a mind fleeing from attack A freak you see, This, my friend, is me I am th person crying from rejection a tear, a drop of blood, my infection Long time ago i forgot how to smile I haven't been happy in quite a while This, my friend, is me Tell me,... you must see. Yea.. Open to critism or support and suggestions whatever. I need all the help i can get! You say Freak like it's a bad thing... |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Very nice piece. Great way of letting your emotions talk. |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
I'm trying to get myself out of a situation like that myself...hope it goes good for ya. Jenni Every oak tree started out as a couple of nuts who stood their |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You have managed to put your feels down quite well. This is a very good piece of poetry. I hope you can continue to be yourself within this loneliness you feel. I alos hope you can see some kind of light within the darkness. We all have times when there is nothing but darkness....hopefully we get through in decent shape. If you need someone to talk to......feel free to contact me. Marilyn. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I have felt like this before so I understand. Don't let it eat you. |
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