Fatally Attracted - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #3

Fatally Attracted

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2003-05-11 11:43 PM

Tired of the enchanted horse,
the horse that gallops through fiery fury,
yielding without being buried.

I tried to tell her,
I really did, but she turned her head.
Her blue sea hypnotized her illusion.

Forget the pressure,
Concentrate on her tulip lips,
exploring her undiscovered belly of virgin.

Trials of shyness are absurd,
absurd you ask?
Not so, when her beauty is magnified by an infectious smile.

Smiles of innocence,
yet calm confidence.
I remain poetically still, yet jump for promise.

Her flirtatious swager keeps me honest,
honest to a pulp.
Hide myself while she ponders?

Its been a while,
maybe as long as those lonely nights.
True as my skin, I remain idolizing her wind.

My heroism becomes a mystique,
creating my disbelief.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2003-07-08 10:33 PM

I am in disbelief that..you..are so..good.

I love your style. This piece was great, better than the last even. Wow..I feel inspired..
Must go write..
~Lex

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2003-07-08 11:45 PM

this has so much feeling beautiful poem.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.