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Dark Poetry #3

"Maison de Sante"

ffpercent243
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since 2003-05-04

Posts 37
United Kingdom

0 posted 2003-05-10 07:40 PM

Also near the end of its life:
The old blackbird looks up at me
As if to say
"Please do not hurt me."

I feed it some bread,
And in the garden we sit together,
Both waiting for the same thing.

I, with a broken mind;
It, with a broken wing.

wings of the moon
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since 2003-03-27

Posts 323
Pink bubblegum land

1 posted 2003-05-11 04:35 AM

nicely put, I like the broken wing, broken mind comparison...
a very touching, original write...

love,
claire x

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

dani
Junior Member

since 2003-05-10

Posts 46

2 posted 2003-05-11 11:08 AM

we're living in a broken world

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

3 posted 2003-05-11 12:16 PM

Awe, the last lines are truly touching!! I loved this one!!

ELMO

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

ffpercent243
Junior Member

since 2003-05-04

Posts 37
United Kingdom

4 posted 2003-05-11 03:24 PM

Thank You

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