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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land 
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Sitting amongst dusted woodpiles the porcelain cracking in a smile. inattentive the sunshine filters daydreams from the outside. The cot is bare and absent of laughter The long corridors are still. Only the hazy soil remembers the feel Of the sharpening footsteps, The lively souls. "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
Nice one...gimme more  how will i laugh tomorrow |
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ffpercent243 Junior Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 37United Kingdom |
Um, not quite sure of the meaning of this poem, but that is not a loss, it made me re-read it and there are not many poems that scream out for that. |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
 MellonCollie,thank you for your sweet words  Claire xx |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
ffpercent243, I'm glad you re-read it and appreciated it... welcome to passions  love, claire xx "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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