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Demons Grin
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Demons Grin |
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just a junkie Member
since 2003-03-04
Posts 53 |
Demons Grin Blinded by the spike Devoured by addiction Tainted blood and poison Lost in the affliction Speeding like a freight train Through tracks of veins decayed Forever lost in time Silence loudly played Loneliness is knocking On mirrored panes of glass Memories of yesterday Only come to pass Broken hearts are littered Where demons left and smiled Now there is a junkie Where once there was a child. Just A Junkie |
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ljossberir Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 81Ny, USA |
this is amazing work, truly! vivid, full of passion. I find it very fascinating the implied idea of demon(s)trying to corrupt children with drugs (at least it seems as though it made that connection) This poem strikes me on more than one level, very awesome work! -matt |
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stupefied Junior Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 12dead america |
this was great! i loved it..just brings vivid pictures into my mind. the whole thing just flows together. great job! "sticks and stones are hard on bones aimed with angry art...words can sting like anything but silence...SILENCE BREAKS THE HEART... |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very sad how life turns out for some people You are so vivid in your writings.  ~Elizabeth Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
awesome poetry. I love it. |
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AlostHeart Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 78Wisconsin, U.S. |
This is Very Good! I like the ending it's to the point. ~`Tori |
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