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Hard Ache Bay
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Hard Ache Bay |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Hard Ache Bay (Heartache, Stay) You’re alive, you’re in love, you are free! What? Your life’s dream, he doesn’t complete? You wish and you wait and you wait and you hope Yet you make sure it’s just out of reach. You say that he loves you, it’s all that you need But you push and you pull him away. Maybe he’s just a toy on the shelf The lover you’ve tried to create. The aches and the quakes, can you be still? Do you harbor some measure of fear? You smile on the surface, you have a strong will But there’s friction everywhere. Is that your purpose, to suffer? Stir it up, it’s never complete. I watch you try to convince yourself Justification is something you need. Do you hear your own words, or listen to mine? You ask me and then drift away. Where are the ocean waves taking you now? Next trip to Hard Ache Bay. |
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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
If only we could see where we were heading at these times. It would prevent so much pain. Nice poem. Jesus lives in my heart! |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
WoW!! I love this!! The flow is great!! And I've been here before!!   ELMO |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
I felt the urgency in this,demanding answers,unfortunately I've been guilty of this. When you are the person being pushed away its hard to understand why,the cause is utter and total fear, well at least that as my reason hehe  I love your work! it just draws me in everytime ~Talia |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank you!!! |
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