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Dark Poetry #3

Darkness and Shadows

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

0 posted 2003-04-29 11:43 PM

Sitting in the darkness
All alone
Sitting in the shadows
All my own.

Sitting in the darkness
Cold, confused
Sitting in the shadows
So abused.

Sitting in the darkness
Heightened fear
Sitting in the shadows
No one near.

Sitting in the darkness
One more day
Sitting in the shadows
I now pay.

Sitting in the darkness
One more night
Sitting in the shadows
One more fight.

Sitting in the darkness
Now more lies
Sitting in the shadows
Soon to rise.

Jesus lives in my heart!
Sheri Liegh Welna
(formerly Sheri Liegh Adams)
[email protected]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-05-01 06:00 AM

Sherri, I could feel a lot of emotion in
this one. If it's from personal experiences,
I hope everything is better for you now.
Hugs,

Ethel

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

2 posted 2003-05-02 04:35 PM

i got a perfect vision of this picture, but the way you described everything. wonderful rhyming

there are 2 ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it. -unknown

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

3 posted 2003-05-02 05:26 PM

This is great, I luv the format u used!! Hope you find your light soon!!

ELMO

"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!"

RavenEye
Junior Member

since 2003-05-02

Posts 29
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2003-05-02 05:41 PM

Hi,

I came across your poem and found it to be very well expressed. I can feel the pain of your emotions. I hope you are not in this place now. Keep faith.

Bye.

Lost_Soul
Junior Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 37
California, United States

5 posted 2003-05-11 09:32 PM

powerful and moving. everyone has a dark time in there life. I hope you fight the light soon.squeeze:

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