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0 posted 2003-04-28 12:30 PM



I sing a song tonight,
With rhymes in it,
And a blinding sight,

To the occurrences of tomorrow,
I dread the present,
No one should feel sorrow,

This life exist because I wish it,
No substance I sense,
And not a friend to greet,

Cyclic life,
Provides relief,
With constant strife,

My mind is numb,
As if no thought proceeds,
Reality to I succumb,

This three line rhymes,
Is no new tale,
The princess died,
Listen to the crying wale.


© Copyright 2003 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-28 11:32 PM


Awesome job. You have a really great talent!
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2 posted 2003-04-29 07:16 PM


very dark
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3 posted 2003-05-01 04:46 AM


Thanks for your response.
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