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Dark Poetry #3

Prudent soul

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2003-04-28 12:30 PM

I sing a song tonight,
With rhymes in it,
And a blinding sight,

To the occurrences of tomorrow,
I dread the present,
No one should feel sorrow,

This life exist because I wish it,
No substance I sense,
And not a friend to greet,

Cyclic life,
Provides relief,
With constant strife,

My mind is numb,
As if no thought proceeds,
Reality to I succumb,

This three line rhymes,
Is no new tale,
The princess died,
Listen to the crying wale.

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

1 posted 2003-04-28 11:32 PM

Awesome job. You have a really great talent!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-04-29 07:16 PM

very dark

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2003-05-01 04:46 AM

Thanks for your response.

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