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Jager Junior Member
since 2003-04-27
Posts 12Event Horizon |
Distant was your voice Echoing from miles away Ripping through my heart And tearing me apart We use to always be together We use to share everything Now we barely even look at each other The only thing we share now is pain Laughing turned into cries Communication turned into silence That smile you always wore Nothing more than a memory of old |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Nice start for you first poem. I liked the following lines: That smile you always wore Nothing more than a memory of old |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
the same jager from xenith boards? and well done on the poem.. if you are from xenith this is tulwar.. have fun here by any means. |
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Jager Junior Member
since 2003-04-27
Posts 12Event Horizon |
Hate to disappoint you, but I'm not the "Jager" of which you speak of. |
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tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
wow... good job never leave the light on if you don't want to be found |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
~Laughing turned into cries Communication turned into silence~ This is my fav!! A lot what I am feeling right now!!  Hope to see more of ya soon!! ELMO "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (04-29-2003 03:59 PM).] |
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Jager Junior Member
since 2003-04-27
Posts 12Event Horizon |
Thank you for the warm welcome, qtpieelmo.  |
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