Dark Poetry #3 |
Misunderstandings |
peaceful_dreamer Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 159SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW |
Daily hallucinations crowd my mind Uncanny thoughts happen all the time. Darkness deludes the life I choose to see Individuals I'm acquainted with disagree. Mental paradise is a place I go often Where the many irritations haven't been. My eyes are the sky and it's raining The issues in my mind are not entertaining. With all this evidence I don't see the answer My essence is tired I need an enhancer. It's been hurt numerous times in the same spot I was running away but nowadays I'm caught. Look at the stars; they sure are pretty tonight Each one a pointer showing me the way through life. The man on the moon is trying to tell me something But I'm misunderstanding his message or something. I'm sliding down the rainbow; the storm has passed But I know this sunshine won't last. No matter what the ground is the object of ridicule When the lightening hits and destroys self-rule. |
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rcl 4eva Junior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 19 |
Beatiful poem...I kinda drift like that sometimes |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
wonderfully done! |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
This is Great!! Hope to see more of you soon!! ELMO "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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StephyBob07 Junior Member
since 2003-04-18
Posts 37Texas |
i really loved this poem! i especially love the part about the stars. so beautifully written.~stephy "...and poets are born knowing the language of angels." -Madeline L'Engle |
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