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tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

0 posted 2003-04-19 10:51 AM

nobody knows
what she does
alone in her room
how she sits on her bed
with the knife on her arm
tracing old scars
not hiding at all
you just have to
look to see
listen to hear
the blood flowing
the silent screams
of a girl
at the end of her rope

gpc
Junior Member

since 2003-03-01

Posts 43

1 posted 2003-04-19 11:00 AM

I really like this. excellent imagery. perhaps the end of her rope will be used to hang herself?

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

2 posted 2003-04-19 11:01 AM

perhaps... i'm not sure, thanks for the note

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-04-19 11:32 AM

...and the problem is, nobody knows....

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

4 posted 2003-04-19 12:28 PM

what a sad poem, great...gimme more!!!

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

5 posted 2003-04-19 02:56 PM

some of my poetry is on "teen poetry" but i might start posting here, as most of my poetry is "dark"

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

6 posted 2003-04-19 07:46 PM

so, welcome to the dark side

StephyBob07
Junior Member

since 2003-04-18

Posts 37
Texas

7 posted 2003-04-20 04:43 PM

very great poem. ~stephy

Dreaming is the best thing you can do.

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

8 posted 2003-04-20 06:57 PM

hey, steph, thanks!

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

karebear07
Member

since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

9 posted 2003-04-20 07:15 PM

That was very deep. it was so good. great job. -Kara <><

PoetOfDarkness2002
Junior Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 41
Lost in my dissociative unrealistic world

10 posted 2003-04-21 01:13 PM

this poem sounds like it was written about me....reading it it felt like i was that girl...for many reasons...it was a great poem, i hope to see more..

Manda

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-04-22 05:27 PM

torn:

this is amazing writing here
I do know this
You have brilliantly displayed
the psyche of one on the edge
without salvation

Excellent xxoo

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

12 posted 2003-04-22 06:29 PM

WoW!! Thats kinda scary, gave me goosebumps!!

ELMO

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

13 posted 2003-04-24 03:34 PM

*bump*

*smile*

karebear07
Member

since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

14 posted 2003-04-24 09:11 PM

I really like this poem alot. it is very sad and just sad but good.
-Kara <><

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

15 posted 2003-04-26 09:02 PM

Well stated imagery.

Lost_Soul
Junior Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 37
California, United States

16 posted 2003-04-27 04:54 PM

This is very deep and very good.

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