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Dark Poetry #3

I Come Back to You

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-04-24 01:44 PM

Tears scour my throat
And tear through my heart
A knife that you weild
You make my life miserable
And suffocate all my joy
I know not why I stay
I try sometimes
To run away from it all
But I turn back around
And walk back into your claws
What foolish urge brings me
Back into your murderous arms
What control do you have
That means me long for my demise

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

1 posted 2003-04-25 11:08 PM

Such a sad poem. I hope and pray that you are doing okay. Well written and well expressed.

Jesus lives in my heart!
Sheri Liegh Welna
(formerly Sheri Liegh Adams)
sheriliegh@reddens.ca

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

2 posted 2003-04-26 08:21 PM

there are many times I have felt like that, easy to relate to for me. Good poem, keep writing I look forward to reading more of your work.

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

3 posted 2003-04-26 11:38 PM

wow. that's really deep, and really great. Keep up the awesome work!

peaceful_dreamer

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