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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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NO RETURN Darkness within Brightness without Shadowed by a, cloud of doubt. Am I still living, deep inside? Lacking pain, that I hide. Sharp razor, not even a flinch. Trickling blood, just from a pinch. Life's a blur, death sounds clear. No more need, to ever fear! Death welcomes me, life turns away. No longer easy, for me to stay. I walk toward death, he grabs my hand. Life's slipping, like hourglass sand. When the last grain, comes tumbling down, I change my mind, and turn around. Is it too late? Have I givin in? Did he take my soul? I'm now dead within!  ELMO "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (04-26-2003 11:09 AM).] |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
yeah...i like that one...once again  great work how will i laugh tomorrow |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx MellonCollie--It's always a great feeling to get your replies!!  ELMO "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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Lost_Soul Junior Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 37California, United States |
This was very good. I liked it a lot. |
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peaceful_dreamer Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 159SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW |
This poem is so good! As i was reading it, i could feel my adrenaline rising, and i started to read faster! Great work!!! - Peaceful_dreamer |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
The Darkness within always seem forboding at first glance |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Good angst. Sheesh, a dark Elmo, who'd of thunk it? |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx every1--Yea Wranx, I guess Elmo can be dark too, he is a monster lol, these bright colors have just faded away--Anyway thanx for taking the time to read!! ELMO "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
had to read this again! |
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tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
you always amaze me never leave the light on if you don't want to be found |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Amaze u? lol--thanx tornskirt!! ELMO "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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