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sykopathicfreek
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0 posted 2003-04-24 08:47 AM


I trip myself on purpose
it brings me joy

I eat bullets for fun
guns arent toys.

Rocks to the head
Razors to the fingers

You would never guess how much i bleed
as the stench of death lingers.

Firecrackers between my lips
Rusty nails in my feet

I like the needle in the hip please
what did you expect from someone who was mentally beat?


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Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
1 posted 2003-04-24 11:29 AM


Yep....this is dark!!!!  Interesting write!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Brad Majors
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Georgia
2 posted 2003-04-28 01:40 PM


lovin it!
stupefied
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since 2003-04-26
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dead america
3 posted 2003-04-28 05:23 PM


i like it. i seriously do! just the thought of rusty nails in your feet, oh geez that makes me cringe. but i like it still

"sticks and stones are hard on bones aimed with angry art...words can sting like anything but silence...SILENCE BREAKS THE HEART...

Mon Cherie
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Land of Never-ending Summers
4 posted 2003-05-05 12:23 PM


Cool... Seems kinda painful though...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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