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j-oh-E
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since 2003-05-01
Posts 59
Texas, USA

0 posted 2003-05-05 02:47 PM



Who survives the bombs?
Who makes the fire hunger?
Who can tell the calm before the ashes
Paint the ground gray
Until the warmer weather comes
With the sound of a dull thud
Heard for miles
But ignored on T.V.
Our rats hides hang on a wall.
And the patience is stapled
As the news blares the fall of CNN.

© Copyright 2003 Joe Gomez - All Rights Reserved
RavenEye
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since 2003-05-02
Posts 29
Ohio, USA
1 posted 2003-05-05 03:46 PM


Hi,

Very poignant, emotional and insightful poem!

Bye,

RavenEye

Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals!

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