Dark Poetry #3 |
Darkness At Noon ReVisited |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
The flipside of a bright, serene day when ghostly damsels bathe in castel moats what darkness could anyone possibly expect what sinistre relationship would then connect unscathed..unharnessed so that darkness would call over any promontory to cast its sheath over each rock crevasse and make sure that no nook goes unfilled a scythed visitor can pass oh so soon... or at Ipatiev house at the call of noon. It is that darkness must be so sombre? after a prick of a desert cactus..hombre to be cast beneath any serene occasion to be strewn..flaunted and yet kept shrouded, shielded from any light the flipside of a non-tumultuous day darkness visits, oh so soon a touch to the lips...you swoon... but behind its unflinching abundance families still work in total ignorance of when and where that cape will approach the nature of its call...how it will encroach. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (04-22-2003 04:37 PM).] |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I love this, although I need a dictionary for some of the words--lol!! This deserves a big vote!! ELMO |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
simply love this one! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very good..... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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