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Dark Poetry #3

past all repair

kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

0 posted 2003-04-17 10:14 PM

black eyed reflection,
broken and bruised.
funny i dont feel that i was abused.
you dont understand,
why i put up with it?
still smile when i think of my lack of regret?
why do i come back,
night after night,
if im not even going to put up a fight?
do i like to be beaten?
maybe thats how i cope.
with the rest of the world that has given up hope,
on me and my black eyes,
with my little smile,
im not trying to mock you its only my style?
but im not that differnt.
or didnt you know,
how blatent the bruises under your eyes can show?

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-04-17 11:47 PM

You've really made me think, and I love the ending. You've got my vote! Wow

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

2 posted 2003-04-18 04:47 AM

interesting topic, liked it a lot...keep on writing

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2003-04-20 05:56 PM

Getting my vote.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Crazy Eddie
Member

since 2002-09-14

Posts 178

4 posted 2003-04-20 06:59 PM

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-04-24 03:35 PM

Chris:

sorry was late on this
amazing write
Congratulations!
xxoo

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