Dark Poetry #3 |
Alternative Nun |
jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
Hello I am new here, so this is one of my debut poems, I ma 14 years old and from IL. My name is Janna "Alternative Nun" Into the church and up to the preacher, Come of their lives, the Lord as a teacher. And if it were fake, what would happen to I? Where would I go, go when I die? An alternative nun, so envious of I, Upset when I'm happy, but laughs as I cry, Decisions, destruction, devastated mind, Alone by myself and drawing the line. Sunday morning asleep in my bed, And one week earlier, thoughts filled my head, Do I regret it? Oh no, not I, But where will I go, go when I die? An alternative nun, or maybe its me, I was so innocent, how can this be? Father I'm sorry, for I have sinned, But I dont regret it, this is the end. Taught one way but chose another, Ashamed is my Father, Ashamed is my mother, Its my choice and choose it will I, I know where Ill go, go when I die. Written By: Janna Shaffer |
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MellonCollie Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117Austria,Europe |
that's a nice and in some way wicked poem...liked it, lookin' forward to read more how will i laugh tomorrow when i can't even smile today [This message has been edited by MellonCollie (04-16-2003 06:10 PM).] |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
WoW!! This is beautiful!! Hope you find peace here & write often!! Poetry is an escape from all the darkness!! ELMO |
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silvergriffinfire Junior Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 21middle of nowhere |
I agree, a little wicked but wonderful for it. I cast my vote! Descendus Averno Facillis Est |
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