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jaysh
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 133
IL, USA

0 posted 2003-04-16 05:57 PM


Hello I am new here, so this is one of my debut poems, I ma 14 years old and from IL. My name is Janna

"Alternative Nun"

Into the church and up to the preacher,
Come of their lives, the Lord as a teacher.
And if it were fake, what would happen to I?
Where would I go, go when I die?

An alternative nun, so envious of I,
Upset when I'm happy, but laughs as I cry,
Decisions, destruction, devastated mind,
Alone by myself and drawing the line.

Sunday morning asleep in my bed,
And one week earlier, thoughts filled my head,
Do I regret it? Oh no, not I,
But where will I go, go when I die?

An alternative nun, or maybe its me,
I was so innocent, how can this be?
Father I'm sorry, for I have sinned,
But I dont regret it, this is the end.

Taught one way but chose another,
Ashamed is my Father, Ashamed is my mother,
Its my choice and choose it will I,
I know where Ill go, go when I die.

Written By: Janna Shaffer

© Copyright 2003 Janna Jae Shaffer - All Rights Reserved
MellonCollie
Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe
1 posted 2003-04-16 06:09 PM


that's a nice and in some way wicked poem...liked it, lookin' forward to read more

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

[This message has been edited by MellonCollie (04-16-2003 06:10 PM).]

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2003-04-16 11:28 PM


WoW!! This is beautiful!! Hope you find peace here & write often!! Poetry is an escape from all the darkness!!


ELMO

silvergriffinfire
Junior Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 21
middle of nowhere
3 posted 2003-04-18 09:38 PM


I agree, a little wicked but wonderful for it. I cast my vote!

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