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karebear07
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since 2003-04-15
Posts 64
Texas

0 posted 2003-04-17 06:42 PM


This feeling of hate is all over my mind because I  hate what you did to us.
You put us through this.
You made us live with knowing that it was falling apart.
Why did your promblems become part of us?
You alienated us and made us think of the worse.
Everything flew through and around me.
In circles everyday.
I tried not to cry, but it scared me.
Branded in your head, you weren't really sick, just depressed.
You could have at least kept it away from us.
It made you angry, mad, sad, and I thought you hated me.
I know your sorry but I can't help being mad at you.
This feeling of hate because I haven't forgiven what you did.
Don't talk to me, don't even try to give a a simple hug.
Just leave me alone, because you put me through this and I haven't fully forgiven you.

                  -Kara <><

© Copyright 2003 Kara - All Rights Reserved
MellonCollie
Member
since 2003-04-11
Posts 117
Austria,Europe
1 posted 2003-04-17 06:53 PM


interesting poem...like it a lot...who is the person it's about???

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2003-04-17 08:22 PM


WoW, such strong feelings against one person!! I love how you did this, made me feel angry against this person too!!


ELMO

StephyBob07
Junior Member
since 2003-04-18
Posts 37
Texas
3 posted 2003-04-18 08:39 PM


i really felt this poem kara. just hang in there. u won't stay mad forever. this poem is wonderful. ~stephy

Dreaming is the best thing you can do.

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