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devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

0 posted 2002-07-03 09:25 PM

~Dark Angel of Mine~

He haunts me
in my living grave
taunts my senses
with stark disdain
Reminds me
of the loss in life
Offers eternal sacrifice
Yet to his shadowy surprise
I melt
into those hollow eyes
Tell him
of my losses great
Yet still retain
my love
of Fate…

Mock in abundant
anger trail
I’ve won
my earthly place
in hell…

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

[This message has been edited by devina (07-03-2002 09:26 PM).]

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-07-03 10:07 PM

This!
This is the best poem I've read in months!
Maybe the best poem I've read all year!
You are a wonderful poet, and your poetry defiantly backs that up.
I will continue reading what you will provide here.

_Sara_

You laugh at me, because i'm different.
I laugh at you, because you're all the same.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-07-03 10:45 PM

I just have to agree with the Goddess.

I Can't even come up with a wise crack.

(maybe that was a wise crack)
(Sorry)

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

3 posted 2002-07-03 11:08 PM

Tanya, you're making it harder for me to respond to these....they keep leaving me speechless!!! ~sigh~ At least they're wonderful.

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-07-07 02:42 AM

Stop wandering the heaths already.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

blakloks
Member

since 2002-06-01

Posts 60

5 posted 2002-07-07 11:40 AM

wow...creepy

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

6 posted 2002-07-07 03:22 PM

"Tell him
of my losses great
Yet still retain
my love
of Fate…

Mock in abundant
anger trail
I’ve won
my earthly place
in hell…"

enjoyed this very much.
these lines made me smile and think.
great work.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

7 posted 2003-04-13 08:50 PM

Could anybody lend me a wisecrack for this?

Thought not, Hmmm.

Remains good reading, no?

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

8 posted 2003-04-13 08:58 PM

This is so beautifully written!!

I luv the rhythm to it!!

ELMO

rcl 4eva
Junior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 19

9 posted 2003-04-13 09:12 PM

Wow, strong and flowing, a poem redolent with power. Luved it very much

MellonCollie
Member

since 2003-04-11

Posts 117
Austria,Europe

10 posted 2003-04-15 04:45 AM

wow, what a great piece of art...loved it fro the beginning, one of he best poems i've read in this forum

how will i laugh tomorrow
when i can't even smile today

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2003-04-15 05:27 PM

Wow.. so much power and so much said.

enjoyed Devina

Maree.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

12 posted 2003-04-17 03:54 PM

Love you all as always...sorry for the absentness of me, hubby and I just found out we are preggie w/ babe #2...*big glowin grins* Hope you all have a wonderful Beltane this year...I'll try to peek in for it...

~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

silvergriffinfire
Junior Member

since 2003-03-13

Posts 21
middle of nowhere

13 posted 2003-04-18 09:42 PM

Oh I love it. Off to read some more of yours.

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